|The skies weep for the pathetic fallacy.
||[Jul. 26th, 2006|02:39 am]
Title: Monsoon Season [1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6]
Fandom: Gundam Wing
If this fic was homemade mashed potatoes, and the purple prose was delicious gravy, I certainly wouldn't complain about not having enough gravy. In fact, if it was possible to have too much gravy, there might be a problem.
I have a feeling this metaphor doesn't work.
Heero finds out that Wufei is having an affair with Treize, which makes them both miserable. The author trips over the English language while trying to perform complicated tricks with it, and it rains a lot.
Half of the fun of this fic is watching the author pile angst on top of angst, which doesn't really come across well in excerpts. Nevertheless, it was hard to choose which quotes I liked best!
And I'll be upfront: by the sixth chapter of this soggy pile of angstpotatoes, I was ready to switch to a fluffy chocolate mousse, or something.
( just a tasteCollapse )